Week blog 3
For the past two weeks I have been reading Runaways Missing Found by Brian K. Vaughan. This book is a “ Action/Comedy/Teen Romance and it is a pretty cool book I could make a lot of connection's with the book. The mine characters of my book are six teen age students Chase, Karolina, Nico, Molly, Anne, Alex. The actions that my characters act are risk takers because they risk there liefs from the cops because they found out there parents criminal organization and the teens try to find out every thing and the cops don't want them to so they try to stop them I know this because it says in the back of the book. The charters from this book look like cartoon charters I know this because of the the pix on the book. Most of the characters in my book are all teens and nun of them are under 14 years old I know this because in the book it says “NO she ant going shes only 14” and that they are teens. In the book it doesn't say if they a education but I am guessing that they we be in Hight school. All the characters in my book were friends with each other and they did have parents because thats the point of the book. It doesn't talk about if they have money or not and if they have no job am guessing they have no money. Well thats mostly everything about my book.
Alfredo,
ReplyDeleteInteresting storyline. I like how you are trying to describe all of your main characters.
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Could you please spell check? you have many misspelled words. You also have grammar / incomplete sentence errors.
If you are going to lump all of your characters together, make sure you describe what they all look like. You can't just say cartoon characters. What do they look like?
How does each individual character act? Beyond being a risk taker.